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Kabutar_gadu
Kurra Bewarse
Username: Kabutar_gadu
Post Number: 1545
Registered: 02-2012
Posted From: 202.65.148.165
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Monday, August 12, 2013 - 1:12 pm: |
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Musicfan:Teeram kaana raadu aina nuvve odduna padeyyali ante, tanu enduku chestundi?
antaku mundu three lines nene chestanani, last line malla aameke vadilesar,
ikkada kavi bhaavam emante... vaadi prayatnaalu vaadu modalettadu to patch up again.. but Ammayi kuda at the same time respond avvali ani ala raasa
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Musicfan
Celebrity Bewarse
Username: Musicfan
Post Number: 44494
Registered: 05-2004
Posted From: 146.122.225.16
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Monday, August 12, 2013 - 12:02 pm: |
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Kabutar_gadu:నీ ప్రేమతీరం కానరానిది... ఒడ్డున పడేయల్సింది నీవే..
Teeram kaana raadu aina nuvve odduna padeyyali ante, tanu enduku chestundi?
antaku mundu three lines nene chestanani, last line malla aameke vadilesar,
may be odduna cheralsindi nene ante bagundedi.. endukante kaanaraani teeram kanipetti cheralsindi meere.
Attarintiki Daaredi
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Kabutar_gadu
Kurra Bewarse
Username: Kabutar_gadu
Post Number: 1544
Registered: 02-2012
Posted From: 202.65.148.165
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Monday, August 12, 2013 - 11:51 am: |
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Maveric:Maveric
hmmm... sarasaalu...Mav baava ki
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Maveric
Kurra Bewarse
Username: Maveric
Post Number: 2158
Registered: 01-2012
Posted From: 123.237.72.133
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Monday, August 12, 2013 - 11:49 am: |
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Kabutar_gadu:
pigeon baa... |
Kabutar_gadu
Kurra Bewarse
Username: Kabutar_gadu
Post Number: 1542
Registered: 02-2012
Posted From: 202.65.148.165
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Monday, August 12, 2013 - 11:45 am: |
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Kingchoudary:Yee rendu lines athakaledhu thammi
night 1 ki modaletti early morning 3 varaku aalochistu.. raastu ellanu.. inka elagaina finish cheyali ani last line lo paakam sarigga poyyaledu...
naaku ade anipinchindi..but ala jarigipoyindi
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Kingchoudary
Censor Bewarse
Username: Kingchoudary
Post Number: 86680
Registered: 03-2004
Posted From: 86.85.78.32
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Monday, August 12, 2013 - 11:40 am: |
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ఈ నేరం క్షమించరానిది.. కాని భారం మోయాల్సింది నేనే ...
నీ ప్రేమతీరం కానరానిది... ఒడ్డున పడేయల్సింది నీవే..
Yee rendu lines athakaledhu thammi.... rest ok |
Kabutar_gadu
Kurra Bewarse
Username: Kabutar_gadu
Post Number: 1541
Registered: 02-2012
Posted From: 202.65.148.165
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Monday, August 12, 2013 - 11:29 am: |
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Sri1978:Sri1978
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Kabutar_gadu
Kurra Bewarse
Username: Kabutar_gadu
Post Number: 1540
Registered: 02-2012
Posted From: 202.65.148.165
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Monday, August 12, 2013 - 11:28 am: |
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Musicfan:
Thanks Sir..for the honest feedback.
eesari block buster Hit ista DB ki
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Sri1978
Pilla Bewarse
Username: Sri1978
Post Number: 85
Registered: 01-2013
Posted From: 136.1.1.104
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Monday, August 12, 2013 - 11:12 am: |
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Kabutar_gadu:
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Fakester
Pilla Bewarse
Username: Fakester
Post Number: 440
Registered: 07-2013
Posted From: 82.132.222.162
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Sunday, August 11, 2013 - 12:49 am: |
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Nee moham teeralante... Katte nu kottalisindi nene na
Ee kattelu pullalu golendi,mee poetry lo lover timber depo lo gani pani chesavada endi
అన్న రామయ్య కు చిన్న రామయ్య కు అభిమానిని
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Fakester
Pilla Bewarse
Username: Fakester
Post Number: 439
Registered: 07-2013
Posted From: 82.132.222.73
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Sunday, August 11, 2013 - 12:45 am: |
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Kabutar_gadu:
Susta susta nee poetry
అన్న రామయ్య కు చిన్న రామయ్య కు అభిమానిని
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Musicfan
Celebrity Bewarse
Username: Musicfan
Post Number: 44488
Registered: 05-2004
Posted From: 68.42.136.48
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Saturday, August 10, 2013 - 8:37 am: |
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Kabutar_gadu:naa talent gurinchi DB lo evrnanna adugu cheptaaru...
meeku debba baaga padindi, deep gaa hurt ayinattunnar, kavitvam/words lo chala change undi, keep it up..
Chinna improvements unnayi kani thats fine.
ninnati mana teeyani gnapakalu, - ikkada meeriddaru gadipina teeyani gnapakalu anna meaning lo rasina, mee iddaru vidipoyinappudu tanaki mee gnapakalu undakapovachu, so it could have been from your side
agaadham poodchatanini aanakattalu vadaru,
neraaniki bharam emiti?
aksharala sahayam lo aksharala nichena vadutunna type meaning unte inka bagundedi.
malla aksharam annaru, kaalam annaru, renditiki flow kudaraledu,.
రాసుకునే ప్రతి రాత ఈ ప్రేమ జీవికి సమాధి!
నీ ఆలోచనల అగాథం నుండి బయటపడటానికి అక్షరాలని సహాయం అడుగుతున్నా..
కానీ
ప్రతి అక్షరం నాపై కక్షగట్టి నన్ను నిస్సహాయుణ్ణి చేస్తోంది....
aksharanni mimmalni samadhi cheyyataniki sahakarinchatam ledu adi manchidegaa,, konchem improve cheyyali ee words, meaning complete avvaledu.
Overall gaa there is lot of improvment interms of your thougths and words. Keep working you will realize what I am saying, Hope I didnt say anything wrong/discouraging. Gave a frank feedback.
Attarintiki Daaredi
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Sasibabu
Mudiripoyina Bewarse
Username: Sasibabu
Post Number: 11078
Registered: 10-2010
Posted From: 107.211.14.31
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Saturday, August 10, 2013 - 8:16 am: |
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Nee kavitha ki extension
ఈ దాహం తీరనిది .... పువ్వు ని ప్రేమ తో పంచాల్సింది నువ్వే
నీ మోహం తీరాలంటే ..... కట్టె ను కోట్టల్సింది నేనే
And also take this gift as my nazarana for ur kalam which writes kavithal
http://www.tollywoodandhra.in/wp-content/uploads/2011/03/trs-kavitha.jpg
http://i49.tinypic.com/mhdc11.jpg
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Kabutar_gadu
Kurra Bewarse
Username: Kabutar_gadu
Post Number: 1539
Registered: 02-2012
Posted From: 14.99.226.191
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Saturday, August 10, 2013 - 5:55 am: |
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Fakester:Super .. Nijamga nuvve rasava
eeyy Fakesh... naa talent gurinchi DB lo evrnanna adugu cheptaaru...
bewarsetalk.com visit cheyyu.. andulo poetry section mottam naa kavitha le
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Proofdada
Bewarse Legend
Username: Proofdada
Post Number: 126831
Registered: 03-2004
Posted From: 212.95.7.43
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Saturday, August 10, 2013 - 2:05 am: |
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Eeyy vundavalli ga ileeyy...
aa bongulo signature le...
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Fakester
Pilla Bewarse
Username: Fakester
Post Number: 435
Registered: 07-2013
Posted From: 82.132.229.218
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Saturday, August 10, 2013 - 1:31 am: |
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Super .. Nijamga nuvve rasava
అన్న రామయ్య కు చిన్న రామయ్య కు అభిమానిని
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Musicfan
Celebrity Bewarse
Username: Musicfan
Post Number: 44484
Registered: 05-2004
Posted From: 68.42.136.48
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, August 09, 2013 - 11:38 pm: |
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enta deeep love failure aithe matuku inta deep gaa rayalaa.,
Dil pe mat lo, zindagi na mile doobara, par pyaar milegi baar baar,,
Attarintiki Daaredi
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Gochi
Bewarse Legend
Username: Gochi
Post Number: 80972
Registered: 07-2004
Posted From: 24.229.136.147
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, August 09, 2013 - 8:40 pm: |
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neelo saana talent dhaagundi kaboothar baa...ilaati love failures tho disappwoint avvaku...ammayi miss ayyindante party chesukovaali...u will realize it soon
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Kabutar_gadu
Kurra Bewarse
Username: Kabutar_gadu
Post Number: 1537
Registered: 02-2012
Posted From: 202.65.148.165
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, August 09, 2013 - 8:07 pm: |
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Gaali annai.. naa credentials maristi...
dayachesi naa creds pampiste malli nenu mana blog lo ettukunta ee kavitani.. or meere post cheyyandi..
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Rratna
Mudiripoyina Bewarse
Username: Rratna
Post Number: 16157
Registered: 03-2004
Posted From: 76.112.228.50
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, August 09, 2013 - 7:16 pm: |
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There are lot of fish in the ocean annai.
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Kabutar_gadu
Kurra Bewarse
Username: Kabutar_gadu
Post Number: 1536
Registered: 02-2012
Posted From: 202.65.148.165
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, August 09, 2013 - 7:03 pm: |
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Rratna:Rratna
Love failure kada... naaku nene pindukuntunna Annai..
em seyyamlem...
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Rratna
Mudiripoyina Bewarse
Username: Rratna
Post Number: 16156
Registered: 03-2004
Posted From: 76.112.228.50
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, August 09, 2013 - 6:51 pm: |
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pindesav kabutar annai |
Kabutar_gadu
Kurra Bewarse
Username: Kabutar_gadu
Post Number: 1535
Registered: 02-2012
Posted From: 202.65.148.165
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, August 09, 2013 - 6:47 pm: |
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Gochi:mesthri pani
Gossannai... dinchesaav ga kaddi ni...
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Gochi
Bewarse Legend
Username: Gochi
Post Number: 80971
Registered: 07-2004
Posted From: 24.229.136.147
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, August 09, 2013 - 6:15 pm: |
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kaani punaadhi agaadham poodchadam laativi soosi hero mesthri pani sesevodemo ani jaanalu feel avvocchu
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Gochi
Bewarse Legend
Username: Gochi
Post Number: 80970
Registered: 07-2004
Posted From: 24.229.136.147
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, August 09, 2013 - 6:13 pm: |
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touch sesaav pegion baa...
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Kabutar_gadu
Kurra Bewarse
Username: Kabutar_gadu
Post Number: 1533
Registered: 02-2012
Posted From: 183.82.45.179
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Votes: 0 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, August 09, 2013 - 2:22 pm: |
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Entertainment ki address nenu!!!
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Kabutar_gadu
Kurra Bewarse
Username: Kabutar_gadu
Post Number: 1532
Registered: 02-2012
Posted From: 183.82.45.179
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Votes: 1 (Vote!) | | Posted on Friday, August 09, 2013 - 2:15 pm: |
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KC anna, Music Sir, Gaali Sir.. & critics.. come here.. and review it.. chala rojulaki kalam kadilindi after love failure...
తీసుకునే ప్రతి శ్వాస .. ఓ గుండెకోత కి పునాది. రాసుకునే ప్రతి రాత ఈ ప్రేమ జీవికి సమాధి!
నీ ఆలోచనల అగాథం నుండి బయటపడటానికి అక్షరాలని సహాయం అడుగుతున్నా..
కానీ
ప్రతి అక్షరం నాపై కక్షగట్టి నన్ను నిస్సహాయుణ్ణి చేస్తోంది....
కాలం అనే మారణాయుధం నన్ను నిలువునా చంపేస్తోంది...
నేడు చేదు స్మ్రుతులుగా మిగలిన నిన్నటి మన తీయని జ్ఞాపకాలకి కారణం నేనే!
అగాథాలని పూడ్చే ఆనకట్టల నిర్మాణానికి అంకురార్పణ చేయాల్సింది కూడా ఇకపై నేనే...
ఈ నేరం క్షమించరానిది.. కాని భారం మోయాల్సింది నేనే ...
నీ ప్రేమతీరం కానరానిది... ఒడ్డున పడేయల్సింది నీవే...
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