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Author Message   Musicfan Celebrity Bewarse Username: Musicfan Post Number: 44488 Registered: 05-2004 Posted From: 68.42.136.48 Rating: N/A Votes: 0 Posted on Saturday, August 10, 2013 - 8:37 am:    Kabutar_gadu: naa talent gurinchi DB lo evrnanna adugu cheptaaru... meeku debba baaga padindi, deep gaa hurt ayinattunnar, kavitvam/words lo chala change undi, keep it up.. Chinna improvements unnayi kani thats fine. ninnati mana teeyani gnapakalu, - ikkada meeriddaru gadipina teeyani gnapakalu anna meaning lo rasina, mee iddaru vidipoyinappudu tanaki mee gnapakalu undakapovachu, so it could have been from your side agaadham poodchatanini aanakattalu vadaru, neraaniki bharam emiti? aksharala sahayam lo aksharala nichena vadutunna type meaning unte inka bagundedi. malla aksharam annaru, kaalam annaru, renditiki flow kudaraledu,. రాసుకునే ప్రతి రాత ఈ ప్రేమ జీవికి సమాధి! నీ ఆలోచనల అగాథం నుండి బయటపడటానికి అక్షరాలని సహాయం అడుగుతున్నా.. కానీ ప్రతి అక్షరం నాపై కక్షగట్టి నన్ను నిస్సహాయుణ్ణి చేస్తోంది.... aksharanni mimmalni samadhi cheyyataniki sahakarinchatam ledu adi manchidegaa,, konchem improve cheyyali ee words, meaning complete avvaledu. Overall gaa there is lot of improvment interms of your thougths and words. Keep working you will realize what I am saying, Hope I didnt say anything wrong/discouraging. Gave a frank feedback. Attarintiki Daaredi