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Kabutar_gadu
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Username: Kabutar_gadu

Post Number: 1545
Registered: 02-2012
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Posted on Monday, August 12, 2013 - 1:12 pm:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post


Musicfan:

Teeram kaana raadu aina nuvve odduna padeyyali ante, tanu enduku chestundi?

antaku mundu three lines nene chestanani, last line malla aameke vadilesar,





ikkada kavi bhaavam emante... vaadi prayatnaalu vaadu modalettadu to patch up again.. but Ammayi kuda at the same time respond avvali ani ala raasa
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Musicfan
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Username: Musicfan

Post Number: 44494
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Posted on Monday, August 12, 2013 - 12:02 pm:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post


Kabutar_gadu:

నీ ప్రేమతీరం కానరానిది... ఒడ్డున పడేయల్సింది నీవే..




Teeram kaana raadu aina nuvve odduna padeyyali ante, tanu enduku chestundi?

antaku mundu three lines nene chestanani, last line malla aameke vadilesar,

may be odduna cheralsindi nene ante bagundedi.. endukante kaanaraani teeram kanipetti cheralsindi meere.
Attarintiki Daaredi
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Kabutar_gadu
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Post Number: 1544
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Posted on Monday, August 12, 2013 - 11:51 am:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post


Maveric:

Maveric




hmmm... sarasaalu...Mav baava ki

MOVIEART--bemmi.muddu
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Maveric
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Post Number: 2158
Registered: 01-2012
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Posted on Monday, August 12, 2013 - 11:49 am:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post


Kabutar_gadu:



pigeon baa...MOVIEART--gulabi.sharabi
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Kabutar_gadu
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Post Number: 1542
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Posted on Monday, August 12, 2013 - 11:45 am:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post


Kingchoudary:

Yee rendu lines athakaledhu thammi




night 1 ki modaletti early morning 3 varaku aalochistu.. raastu ellanu.. inka elagaina finish cheyali ani last line lo paakam sarigga poyyaledu...

naaku ade anipinchindi..but ala jarigipoyindi
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Kingchoudary
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Posted on Monday, August 12, 2013 - 11:40 am:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post

ఈ నేరం క్షమించరానిది.. కాని భారం మోయాల్సింది నేనే ...
నీ ప్రేమతీరం కానరానిది... ఒడ్డున పడేయల్సింది నీవే..

Yee rendu lines athakaledhu thammi.... rest ok
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Kabutar_gadu
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Posted on Monday, August 12, 2013 - 11:29 am:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post


Sri1978:

Sri1978


MOVIEART--bemmi6
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Kabutar_gadu
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Posted on Monday, August 12, 2013 - 11:28 am:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post


Musicfan:




Thanks Sir..for the honest feedback.

eesari block buster Hit ista DB ki
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Sri1978
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Post Number: 85
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Posted on Monday, August 12, 2013 - 11:12 am:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post


Kabutar_gadu:




MOVIEART--vja.hug
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Fakester
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Post Number: 440
Registered: 07-2013
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Posted on Sunday, August 11, 2013 - 12:49 am:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post

Nee moham teeralante... Katte nu kottalisindi nene na
Ee kattelu pullalu golendi,mee poetry lo lover timber depo lo gani pani chesavada endiMOVIEART--bemmi.sarle
అన్న రామయ్య కు చిన్న రామయ్య కు అభిమానిని
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Fakester
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Post Number: 439
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Kabutar_gadu:



Susta susta nee poetry
అన్న రామయ్య కు చిన్న రామయ్య కు అభిమానిని
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Musicfan
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Post Number: 44488
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Posted on Saturday, August 10, 2013 - 8:37 am:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post


Kabutar_gadu:

naa talent gurinchi DB lo evrnanna adugu cheptaaru...




meeku debba baaga padindi, deep gaa hurt ayinattunnar, kavitvam/words lo chala change undi, keep it up..

Chinna improvements unnayi kani thats fine.

ninnati mana teeyani gnapakalu, - ikkada meeriddaru gadipina teeyani gnapakalu anna meaning lo rasina, mee iddaru vidipoyinappudu tanaki mee gnapakalu undakapovachu, so it could have been from your side
agaadham poodchatanini aanakattalu vadaru,

neraaniki bharam emiti?


aksharala sahayam lo aksharala nichena vadutunna type meaning unte inka bagundedi.

malla aksharam annaru, kaalam annaru, renditiki flow kudaraledu,.

రాసుకునే ప్రతి రాత ఈ ప్రేమ జీవికి సమాధి!
నీ ఆలోచనల అగాథం నుండి బయటపడటానికి అక్షరాలని సహాయం అడుగుతున్నా..
కానీ
ప్రతి అక్షరం నాపై కక్షగట్టి నన్ను నిస్సహాయుణ్ణి చేస్తోంది....


aksharanni mimmalni samadhi cheyyataniki sahakarinchatam ledu adi manchidegaa,, konchem improve cheyyali ee words, meaning complete avvaledu.


Overall gaa there is lot of improvment interms of your thougths and words. Keep working you will realize what I am saying, Hope I didnt say anything wrong/discouraging. Gave a frank feedback.
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Sasibabu
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Posted on Saturday, August 10, 2013 - 8:16 am:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post

Nee kavitha ki extension

ఈ దాహం తీరనిది .... పువ్వు ని ప్రేమ తో పంచాల్సింది నువ్వే
నీ మోహం తీరాలంటే ..... కట్టె ను కోట్టల్సింది నేనే

And also take this gift as my nazarana for ur kalam which writes kavithal

http://www.tollywoodandhra.in/wp-content/uploads/2011/03/trs-kavitha.jpg
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Kabutar_gadu
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Fakester:

Super .. Nijamga nuvve rasava




eeyy Fakesh... naa talent gurinchi DB lo evrnanna adugu cheptaaru...

bewarsetalk.com visit cheyyu.. andulo poetry section mottam naa kavitha le
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Proofdada
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Posted on Saturday, August 10, 2013 - 2:05 am:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post

Eeyy vundavalli ga ileeyy...
aa bongulo signature le...
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Fakester
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Post Number: 435
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Posted on Saturday, August 10, 2013 - 1:31 am:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post

Super .. Nijamga nuvve rasava
అన్న రామయ్య కు చిన్న రామయ్య కు అభిమానిని
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Musicfan
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Post Number: 44484
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Posted on Friday, August 09, 2013 - 11:38 pm:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post

enta deeep love failure aithe matuku inta deep gaa rayalaa.,

Dil pe mat lo, zindagi na mile doobara, par pyaar milegi baar baar,,

MOVIEART--bemmi.poy
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Gochi
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Posted on Friday, August 09, 2013 - 8:40 pm:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post

neelo saana talent dhaagundi kaboothar baa...ilaati love failures tho disappwoint avvaku...ammayi miss ayyindante party chesukovaali...u will realize it soon

MOVIEART--thammudu
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Kabutar_gadu
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Post Number: 1537
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Posted on Friday, August 09, 2013 - 8:07 pm:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post

Gaali annai.. naa credentials maristi...

dayachesi naa creds pampiste malli nenu mana blog lo ettukunta ee kavitani.. or meere post cheyyandi..
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Rratna
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Posted on Friday, August 09, 2013 - 7:16 pm:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post

There are lot of fish in the ocean annai.
MOVIEART--eat
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Kabutar_gadu
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Rratna:

Rratna




Love failure kada... naaku nene pindukuntunna Annai..

em seyyamlem...

MOVIEART--die
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Rratna
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Posted on Friday, August 09, 2013 - 6:51 pm:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post

MOVIEART--thammudu

pindesav kabutar annai
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Kabutar_gadu
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Posted on Friday, August 09, 2013 - 6:47 pm:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post


Gochi:

mesthri pani




Gossannai... dinchesaav ga kaddi ni...

MOVIEART--bemmi.angry
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Gochi
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Posted on Friday, August 09, 2013 - 6:15 pm:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post

kaani punaadhi agaadham poodchadam laativi soosi hero mesthri pani sesevodemo ani jaanalu feel avvocchu

MOVIEART--jump
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Gochi
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Posted on Friday, August 09, 2013 - 6:13 pm:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post

touch sesaav pegion baa...

MOVIEART--sunil.cry
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Kabutar_gadu
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Posted on Friday, August 09, 2013 - 2:22 pm:    Edit Post Delete Post Print Post

MOVIEART--kummesana
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Kabutar_gadu
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KC anna, Music Sir, Gaali Sir.. & critics.. come here.. and review it.. chala rojulaki kalam kadilindi after love failure...

తీసుకునే ప్రతి శ్వాస .. ఓ గుండెకోత కి పునాది. రాసుకునే ప్రతి రాత ఈ ప్రేమ జీవికి సమాధి!
నీ ఆలోచనల అగాథం నుండి బయటపడటానికి అక్షరాలని సహాయం అడుగుతున్నా..
కానీ
ప్రతి అక్షరం నాపై కక్షగట్టి నన్ను నిస్సహాయుణ్ణి చేస్తోంది....
కాలం అనే మారణాయుధం నన్ను నిలువునా చంపేస్తోంది...

నేడు చేదు స్మ్రుతులుగా మిగలిన నిన్నటి మన తీయని జ్ఞాపకాలకి కారణం నేనే!
అగాథాలని పూడ్చే ఆనకట్టల నిర్మాణానికి అంకురార్పణ చేయాల్సింది కూడా ఇకపై నేనే...

ఈ నేరం క్షమించరానిది.. కాని భారం మోయాల్సింది నేనే ...
నీ ప్రేమతీరం కానరానిది... ఒడ్డున పడేయల్సింది నీవే...
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